All Comments on 'These too must pass'

dont allow it to, TK U MLJ LV NV

Unfortunately it takes two....

What do the letters at the end of your comment mean by the way? I've wondered for a while ...

reading your new poem, summer of '99, I went to your page and read your others. This is good too. A bit of advice, in any poem that you want to be taken seriously, it is better to not abbreviate words like though as you did with "tho".

It just takes away from the quality. It is only a suggestion and I only made it because I see an emerging poetic talent in you and people helped me when I first came here and little things like that can kill an otherwise excellent piece of work.

Keep up the good work!

~ maria