by My Erotic Trail
Good poem.
I get the feeling that you could have done more with it though. Maybe if you omitted the direct star mentions in the poem. It's such a strong title that it would hold that metaphor on it's own.
Anyway, I'm nitpiucking. This is one of your better ones. Keep em coming.
A beautiful poem...with such an ethereal beauty. The innumerable thoughts like stars light up our creative sparks to fan the flames of creativity.
just need to look in the mirror and see your starry reflection...big sigh...blue