All Comments on 'Tock'

A well-crafted tale set to a clock's tempo. I wonder if you could do more with the meter of the poem, and really let the rhythm drive the story?

Neva~~ I loved it..Time waits for no man. Loved the imagery. Told the tale of time, moving, waiting for no one. Just loved this one. Think your writing just gets better and better. The flow was great too. Was smooth and kept with a stern hand..Well done~..More I ask~~!!!