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by AJQuick

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
'Ur Nom de Plune is Quick but you sure took the foreplay ...slowly...seductively...prolooonged it !!

These 2 lines stand Out for me :

To feel her warm breasts slide over my chest as my hand slides over her lace covered ass

.......to feel her hips in my strong hands ...

5-ed .

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Three little words

All that foreplay, the tension and the passion is rewarded by her whispering those three little words. AJQ, your first poetry posting is most enjoyable. Thanks.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
IS IT CRAVINGS

or lustful thinking. TK U MLJ LV NV

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