All Comments on 'too horny for foreplay'

cause I think you're a quick learner and it shows in this poem. This stanza~

it is all teeth, biting and clawing

nails rend as you drag me to you

our mouths crash together

tasting tongues and lips

you urgently reach down and force me

into you

the soft collision as I nail you to the floor

has almost no "telling," and that last line especially says a great deal with very few words, the trick being that you found just the right words. :)

Pretty soon I'm going to start expecting more raps on the knuckles and harsher critiquing to help push me to the next level of writing :-)

undressing is for humans

this is a good line, even great in context

the rest i've seem to have seen before

title is good

5ed - but newb 5

. I appreciate the 5 and the comments, it seems like a sympathy fuck more than a genuine five hahaha I will accept it like a teenage boy in heat though :-)