All Comments on ''Twas The Night For Pleasure'

i have read a few of the poems on this site and so far, yours has been the best. i like poems that still rhyme and yours was wonderful. thank you

I wanted to score higher because this really looks like you took a lot of time. The rhymes were excellent and didn't seemed forced, but the meter was off causing problems with the flow. But damn, this was hilarious!!

Thanks for the read, Dana

IT'S WAS VERY CUTE AND VERY HOT. NICE JOB

This was far beyond the poem I expected from this site, surprisingly creative, vivid and visual, and erotic beyond belief. Most of the time I could not understand if the woman, the narrator, wanted the abuse, if it was voluntary or not, etc. The beginning sounded like this was something out of "8mm". I read it cringing, but saw every picture perfectly. Great fucking job! The last line is priceless, an instant masterpiece. Please, keep writing! You got a heck of a talent!!!!!!!!

this was such a goofily good poem,,, i'm not into such BDSM?, with leather, belt, dog collars, etc., but the poem's visceralness and tongue in cheek nature made me started laughing from the second stanza onward,,,!

Thank you for all the hard work. This was an excellent piece of work!