All Comments on ''Twixt Ah and Oh'

by melissah

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I like this work

I enjoyed the sound of it in the mouth. :-) the repetition and alliteration were sexy and the images graceful.

Thanks for the poem.

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowalmost 18 years ago
Delicious

Lovely alliteration and measure. Felt good in the mouth. (pun intended) hehe

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
passion

Making love to a passionate woman who makes those oh so lovely

"Ah" "oh" sounds ~ Heaven on Earth time!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
erotic

The sweet affection shines through this erotic rendering. Using the sounds Ah and Oh gives it such an intimate feeling.

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