by melissah
I enjoyed the sound of it in the mouth. :-) the repetition and alliteration were sexy and the images graceful.
Thanks for the poem.
Lovely alliteration and measure. Felt good in the mouth. (pun intended) hehe
Making love to a passionate woman who makes those oh so lovely
"Ah" "oh" sounds ~ Heaven on Earth time!
The sweet affection shines through this erotic rendering. Using the sounds Ah and Oh gives it such an intimate feeling.