All Comments on 'un-Broken Promise'

introspective piece. it flows beautifully and this

But I have learned

in the wee hours

when morning seems a broken promise

that gender is blind

and doubt (self-hate)

is omnipotent, darkness

touches us all.

is my favorite part :)

"I thought the lugubrious end"

I thought what a horrible first line

Oh god, what am I going to be reading?

A perfect line to lead into the second

"a feminine trait (affliction?),"

followed by more, each just getting better

much. much better than an 100

I did not like the ending at first,

but it fits in context, and can offer the suggestions