All Comments on 'vegetable soup'

by steve porter

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sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
I would pick a veggie

that doesn't look so much like a penis. Maybe a onion

so I could kiss the girls and make them cry.

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
different, but

good...isn't the purpose of this to make us think? it worked on me, not so much about the carrot as it is about the people...and if I were walking a veggie, it would be a huge thick cucumber!!! mmm, ohh yeah... ;)

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
lol.

i think you should have picked a zucchini. This is an extremely silly poem young man, but it made me laugh like the fool i am, so wtf--it's a 5. :D

p.s. only a person in your line of work would write this. ;)

misskittyclittymisskittyclittyabout 20 years ago
Made me laugh!

I have visions of a carrot on a leash.

Mmmmmm or maybe a cumcumber...

steve portersteve porterabout 20 years agoAuthor
interesting...

...the direction readers take this little ditty (cucumber, zuccini, onion)...yes its silly and yes it says something about people...just dont ask me what...thanks for reading and im glad i made you smile.

SeattleRainSeattleRainabout 20 years ago
shel silverstein

eat your heart (of artichoke) out

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Ah, perhaps

a bit of Ogden Nash too. Some excellent Verses, but then again, I'm a stranger here myself... nice poetry and salad fixings...

jim : )

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