All Comments on 'Vertical Blinds'

j'aime les femmes

I'll never look at my verticals in the same old way again....

Turning the lights out and playing this on Media Player with the "light show" effects puts me back in the 60s.

In a good way.

Now where are my Jefferson Airplane albums?

Nice work. I'm not usually fond of repetition in poetry, but I really enjoyed it in this poem. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! :)

The music was rather subdued until that first "striped fragment of sky." That made my eyes wide. :)

After listening to the audio, I had to take a quite moment to read the poem. The words alone are very good.

Very good with audio a nice complement to the written word.