All Comments on 'Victoria'

...the train pulling into the station...the txt messages back and forth... not being able to see you in the crowds...your smile when you realised I had seen you...a day I will never ever forget...and now those first moments captured in verse...thankyou !

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

Loved the poem....the anticipation and finally the realisation of it happening at last....hmmm, something I could relate to instantly *wink*. In some instances, the first time is always the best ;-) Well done and good luck!!

like a classic sweet tale...blue

or just short lines?