All Comments on 'Victory is Fleeting'

I told you it would help.

And you're right ...

Victory IS fleeting.

Just remember that

when old haunts try to resurrect themselves

in the ugly form of a bitch ...

And I quote,

"Hollow victories are fleeting at best"

{muah}

Kudo's to ya my friend.

I like the flow

and the thoughts painted here.

More Plaese ~

a hollow victory is not really a victory, but only a stop gap of one searching for something they can't find. Who knows, perhaps he will call,if nothing else, just to talk

I love the flow of words, it's heartfelt and sad.

subject matter.

Obviously this was written to get something off your mind rather than as a serious poem. Hope it helped. Sorry I read it.