All Comments on 'Vision 7.31.14'

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TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
Love it

It has that dream/vision flow and feel. Smoothly moving from one picture to the next without feeling disjointed. Very nice.

todski28todski28over 9 years ago
agree with trix

It fleshes together like those moments in the throes of passion, just odd that you ended up on his back, then the vibrator...... Where did he go......

Ok so I'm just teasing very sexy imagery and very well weighted to tie back to your title, be interested in what you classify as erotic :p

susansnowsusansnowover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

All the feedback is great. I appreciate it.

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