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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 15 years ago
hello

Your poem is included in the reviews for Sat. Jan 17th

Tess.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 15 years ago
this

your wording is quite beautiful-- the ropes of semen made me cringe, but after having read it again, I see it was necessary, and the sadness, emptiness, like a hollow door... very well done, hope to see more

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 15 years ago
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A beautifully written piece conveying so much but not a single word wasted

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