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by fieryjen

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago
This is nice........

...but it feels like an appetizer promising more to come, hopefully. You convey the nervous excitement well in a bare-bones way, I'd like to see it more fleshed out.

Tess

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