- Erotic Poetry
- Wanna Shower?
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Click hereHot rain showering all around,
pounding into my soft sensitive skin.
Tawny hair shimmering,
silken strands flowing,
down my slick wet back.
Open mouth taking nourishment,
from the Fountain Of Love.
As my taste buds explode,
from the steamy sensual drops.
Delicate fingers tracing,
blushing cheeks,
pouty pink lips.
Slow descent south,
across slender tight belly.
Hot pink nails rake,
down trembling thighs.
Dainty lil toes,
suspended on the soap dish.
Lean tan body pressed,
against the shower glass.
Jasmine permeating the air,
as steam covers every surface.
Moaning lil pants,
echoing off the walls.
Firm fingers roaming,
stroking scrumptiously,
on my spastic pink clit.
"Grasping the shower bar
gasping."
As my fondling fingers,
dive into my hot lil treasure.
Gliding so fast inside and out,
going harder,
stronger,
to my very center.
Deep inside to the very spot,
seeing stars,
as glitter rides the air.
My treasure clamps around,
my furious lil fingers.
Tight lil spasms shoot,
robbing me,
of my last screaming breath.
Wet hot honey trickles down,
clammy-tingling thighs.
Body shakes take over.
panting-panting-panting
Dainty lil foot slips,
while my fingers
reach for the bar.
Me falling on my ass,
into the slick,
wet shower floor.
Nothing hurt,
as far as I can tell.
Now that,
was my kind of shower.
- COMMENTS
darthjserover 16 years agoNow that's hot! Sensual and erotic, quite a strong scene of playful fingers teasing center of pleasure, lost in a world of fantastic music most kind
EriAliSaaalmost 18 years agoYou slipped. You slipped and my ass hurt. I couldn't go to 100 because I think I might have a bruised butt.
Seriously, I really liked, your style loses me in places but this really drew me in.
Lonelypoetover 18 years agoThis poem made me squirm.....and squirm.......and squirm! ~ Lonelypoet
symonalmost 19 years agoI'm amazed, all the time, at the talent that makes up the body of Literotica. And what a body it is! This piece is another example of that talent. The imagery is amazing, the wording is exotic, and the more I read, the faster my heart began to beat.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoIt got me to the same place that you took yourself, but I was sitting down and didn't fall *giggle. Absolutely sizzlin!
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agoI like 'rain closet' poetry and dont fret the grammar police, they can not help themselves. Remember, we don't write for numbers, we write for enjoyment. so they can scratch at your literary creation with trying to teach you to be better by lowering your rating, it's a brain thing (*_*) like neo said, glad to have ya back,
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoAuthorHi ya peeps~!
Yes, Saldne I appreciate the comment and the honesty~! *Smiles*
Neo~ You so Rock~!! *Grins*
I am over-all Happy with this submission. Sometimes one works on a poem, and it takes over. That is what happened in this case. It would not leave me be. So I had to purge. To me, that was submitting, so I could get the poem *out* of my system. Please believe me when I say, I really did edit..play..and work on this one like a lil demon.
Thank you to all who post, good or bad... Thats why we are here...*Huggs to ya'll*~
RhymeFairy~
Anonymousalmost 19 years agogreat imagery RhymeFairy and did I tell you that it was great to have you back?
