All Comments on 'Weak'

Hits home hard.

It avoids the trap of becoming mawkish. The pace and style suit the topic.

One question. I was unable to decypher the meaning of the last line.

I don't think so

Poetry?

it's a start

Keep it up, although writing is a huge pain in the ass, it looks like you can take it

I think I got the last line.

I agree with Cleardaynow - and I don't get the last line either. Private thought? Twelveoone is correct as well - not weak, human.

Thanks, Guys. I had a few different purposes with the last line. I decided to leave it vague and let the reader interpret it. What do you think?

Father , right ?

wanting to stand tall. TK U MLJ LV NV

good to see you write again