All Comments on 'Wednesday'

typical day eh ~ I love the imagery you used here.

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deep passions of half-waking dreams

in the middle of the night, drag me, mermaid-like, beneath a tide of

grey skies and curtains of rain drawing in.

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More please ~

This poem has been mentioned in New Poem Reviews

Great imagery here or

Perhaps it's the

Cold drizzly outside that

Permeates walls and

Bones...

Thanks guys - I really appreciate the feedback. And I promise I will keep writing :) I'm just slow getting stuff finished around work and play and sleep and life.