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CaligrlCaligrlalmost 13 years ago
Better than coffee...

Great way to start any morning, jazz is simply an added bonus!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 13 years ago
~

Bit too prosy, we don't need to know about you getting dressed/undressed. Could be good if tightened up

Lady ClarissaLady Clarissaover 12 years ago
Very evocative.....

....another thoughtful poem from you.

Thanks!

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