All Comments on 'Wet'

then you may miss out on an opportunity to receive some good, constructive feedback that may allow you to greatly improve your poetry.

Okay, it's a nice poem. :) I'm leaving the thermometer on the default (50) since I'm not sure how nice of a rating I can give this. Thanks for sharing. Write more. Visit the literotica poetry board.

Wetness does not always pertain to water

in an ocean, river or lake;

Sometimes it refers to how I feel

when I remember your embrace.

You know, most of us here think of pussy when we hear the word wet, not the ocean.

Okay okay I never said I was a great poet. I've been writing poetry all my life, ever since I was in high school, and someone told me I should share my poetry with the World. That doesn't mean it's great or that I even think it's great...just that I thought I could and/or should try it.

Asking readers to be nice doesn't mean that I don't want to hear what they have to say...just that I'm asking for a bit of compassion...I never thought it was too much to ask from anybody, guess I'm a fool uh :(((

LadyCibelle

Hey it is okay to ask readers to be nice, as a few can often be cruel in the eyes of the writer without really intending to be, but it does kind of put those who want to help each other leave helpful comments. Keep writing! Dont be discouraged. If you want some feedback, just let us know, poets who stick around do make significant progress. Give us a chance to get to know your work and when you trust the readers, we can help you like we all have helped each other-- don't be sad :( It is really hard to share what you have written. People around here think of pussy when they hear wet, cocks when they hear hard, ass when they hear crack, but if you are in a room of geologists it would be different :) This is not really a representive crowd where many people can say cum on my tits as easily as they say what's for dinner (which can mean so many things lol)

hang in there and keep writing!

this is anna, like Eve I left the 50 not as a vote but as a default-- it does not affect your score-- is just a marker

I think it's pretty good lol

Maybe insecure, obtuse, hallucinagenic wordplay appeals to some, but not this writer.

Keep up the good work. Thank goodness for straight up and down writing with feeling.

:-)

Take the poem as it was written and enjoy on that level. If I were the person the poem alludes to nothing could make me happier than to read it with the author.

Your right in your bio you should stick to what your good at.

Like beauty, the title of a piece conjures up an image in each reader's mind. Some may see it as you do, others quite the opposite as the reactions posted clearly show.

I'll bet your intended had no trouble in defining your intent.

Poetry per se is not my favorite, but I'll watch for your next postings.

I think every female reader will be able to relate to this lol

Awesome job hon... made me want to wake my partner ;-)

to double post...

I just read some of the comments left..

What annaswirls said hon... they're fantastic in the poetry forum. I'd never written poetry before, they bent over backwards to help. You won't find a nicer bunch of people, nor will you find better advice.

See you there hopefully.