All Comments on 'What Use is Winter Dusk?'

The first stanza is an absolute delight! I can visualize the entire poem and to me, that is what excellence in poetry is, not just a bunch of big words strung together. Well done!

~ maria

or the bearskin rug. TK U MLJ LV NV

acted as support and not restraint for this write. personally, i had no issues with the beats per line - they all fell nicely into place as i read it, even though some stresses might occur in places they wouldn't normally; it didn't stilt the flow in any way for this reader.