All Comments on 'When I Dared Dream'

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Somewhere in the midst of reality

reality leaves stains and marks, does that mean that the adventure was not worth it? IMO It stays ambigious, the way many of us feel about much of what we do or at our station in life.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Nicely open to interpretation; sensing disappointment at life's daily encounters.

lobomaolobomaoover 16 years ago
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hopes worn grey

from finger tip to type

watching away facial ticks

tears to put our past wrongs right

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fleeing

Yeah, I got that fleeing from the yawn part well enough !!

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