All Comments on 'When she says loverly'

by Colleen Thomas

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minsueminsueabout 19 years ago
Simply lovely

or loverly. It's both, beautiful.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
loverly

excellent poem Colleen~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Colly, you've done it again....

it takes my breath away. Wonderful.

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenabout 19 years ago
It's the simple pleasures

The smallest things can sometimes command the largest reactions. Sweet sentiment. It made me smile.

~lucky

shlockshlockabout 19 years ago
obsreving the normally unnoticed...

This bit of playful prose claims the tension,

detaining attention

That I reserve for only her...

... and she for me.

Very nice, thank you for sharing! :)

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
I love it !!

Sexy stuff here Colleen.

More poems plez ~!!

KyrlaKyrlaover 18 years ago
powerful emotion!

pretty,

personal,

emotional.

I'm curious, who inspires you to write these lines?

I would find it difficult to believe these come from imagination rather than memory as there is such real emotion in them. :-)

-Kyrla

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well, I don't know the real origin of the word

or the specific context that you use "Loverly" but why it might sound familiar to many is the song from "Sound of Music", "Wouldn't it be Loverly",

"Someone's 'ead restin' on my knee,

Warm an' tender as 'e can be. 'ho takes good care of me,

Aow, wouldn't it be loverly?

Loverly, loverly, loverly, loverly"

This poem is special: it denotes a depth of emotion rarely seen. Beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
wrong musical

"Loverly" is not in the Sound of Music. That song is in My Fair Lady.

don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Great reading!

Body language at its best!

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