by oregon_gal
but you're poems really resonate with me. The imagery is clear, sparkling even. I like in this one the sense of love between the physical descriptions!
I look forward to more from you!
Another newbie!
Welcome to the world of Lit.
A good first read,
now let me see
what else you've writ...
tongue tips dancing ..luv the alliteration...grabs the reader ..as the rest runs in waves of sensual moments...nice..welcome...bluerains
you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.
you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.