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All Comments on 'While You Were Sleeping'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
great

beautiful and sweet a great capture of the innocence of a child... lovely

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
A touching piece...

about stopping to appreciate the simple moments of life.

We2andmaybeUWe2andmaybeUabout 19 years ago
such a beauty...

your words are heartfelt touching and beautiful through and through....LOVELY POEM!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
touching write

and you say you can't do poetry

well what do you call this?

I call it wonderful words of as poem <grin>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Sweet...

deep...beautiful....and straight from a mother's heart!

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