by Dale_Arden
Very intereting imagery. I particularly loved the two closing stanzas. The ironic use of 'negative' images supports an experienced and sober maybe alone but not lonely sole.
I cannot explain exactly why, but it touches me deep inside.
i have enjoyed your work.
'My body is too liberal
to be flavor.' What a great opening line and amazingly as I read on I kept bumping into even more amazing lines. My favorite, 'I am an anorexic heat,
a paper fire, flames
wild but useless and soon out.'