All Comments on 'Why I Am Not Your Love'

'My body is too liberal

to be flavor.' What a great opening line and amazingly as I read on I kept bumping into even more amazing lines. My favorite, 'I am an anorexic heat,

a paper fire, flames

wild but useless and soon out.'

I cannot explain exactly why, but it touches me deep inside.

i have enjoyed your work.

Very intereting imagery. I particularly loved the two closing stanzas. The ironic use of 'negative' images supports an experienced and sober maybe alone but not lonely sole.