by sweet GA peaches
I was trying to be thoughtfulllll,
then you punched me with the ending. Just loved it !!!
Sweet sexy lil ride on the wings
of passions intent. Then passion expoldes
taking all on a roller coaster ride
of merriments delight ~
Grrr ~
Yepp Muchh more,
you have a gift,
and we love it here at Lit !!!
You have some very nice lines in this poem, but they are weighted down with your cliched ones.
Well done
and getting better.
Can always feel the powerful pulse
of a true Southern Lady !
ya love unless it was wanton ..katie bar the doors...luvfromblue
...as I was reading this I kept thinking that sGAp was being very coy, but finally the real you is revealed, wickedly.
ty,bd