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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
This is a liitle more clever

than meets the eye

end line Noun,noun,noun, 4 adverbs (I think), noun. I'm not sure how effective, coupled with the front start. Clever. People react more to verbs and nouns. A 5. Liked the thinking behind the pattern.

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