All Comments on 'With You Without M'

Provocative! Keep up the good work hon! ~Minx

Perfectly conveys the feelings of distance and loneliness.

I think this is a common "missing" behavior that is less often addressed in poetry and this is an effective way to state it...

Footsteps in the hallway

I run to the door.

With you without me

It's not you anymore.

I am prone to this imaginative deception that the missed love one's car is pulling into the driveway, hearing keys jingle, etc.

;love the way this read, excellent poem!