All Comments on 'World peace'

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tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Appreciate the impetus

behind this poem, having daughters myself. But Savage doesn't world peace mean not killing anyone?

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
I like the idea.

Amen to this:

Let's believe

that Ala and God are one and the same!

But I do not undersatnd this:

Let's nuke them! Let's blow them to kingdom come...but people...please...let's

not kill another of our own.

How does nuking them serve world peace?

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Miragealmost 20 years ago
Excellent start...

but I have to agree with everyone else...the end kind of kills the sweet Daddy image wanting to make his daughter happy...delete the last few lines & you will sound like a loving father again instead of a want-to-be warmonger hiding behind a false illusion of peace...

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