All Comments on 'World peace'

by SavgeWolf

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Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Miragealmost 20 years ago
Excellent start...

but I have to agree with everyone else...the end kind of kills the sweet Daddy image wanting to make his daughter happy...delete the last few lines & you will sound like a loving father again instead of a want-to-be warmonger hiding behind a false illusion of peace...

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
I like the idea.

Amen to this:

Let's believe

that Ala and God are one and the same!

But I do not undersatnd this:

Let's nuke them! Let's blow them to kingdom come...but people...please...let's

not kill another of our own.

How does nuking them serve world peace?

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Appreciate the impetus

behind this poem, having daughters myself. But Savage doesn't world peace mean not killing anyone?

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