Arresting and interesting for the most part. I'd tweak it in a few places, but overall it's a strong poem that conveys its message with urgency. Just one opinion and thank you for the read!
Single female writer. Most of my work is an effort to unlock my true self from the trauma of a lifetime of violent experiences, both sexual and nonsexual. I enjoy using the prose poetry style but have been known to venture from and to form and category. I enjoy reading comment...