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All Comments on 'Your Eyes Are On Me'

by JUDO

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
look but don't touch~

bummer ... nice poem

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
liked it

Loved the last 2 lines,

a really nice read.

thanks.

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Some of the comments....

...won't open completely but I'm betting they're positive. This is lovely and the last two lines are the perfect ending. A 5 but worth more.

Tess

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
my eyes are open...

here and the last two lines are absolutely priceless. i'm glad that i took a look.....nice work......don

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