by Middleagepoet
The intermixing of light and dark, passion and cold, shadow and sunlight makes this little sketch of love a poem that is a beautiful read of contrasts. - Your best so far. Please keep writing and sharing with us.
and evocative. I love the way it uses images from the natural world to convey abstracts--so vivid! Overall, the poem is, for me, reminiscent of Neruda and his vibrant, sensual imagery.
.....and wistful. I enjoyed reading this several times and will again. Thank you.