by Middleagepoet
.....and wistful. I enjoyed reading this several times and will again. Thank you.
and evocative. I love the way it uses images from the natural world to convey abstracts--so vivid! Overall, the poem is, for me, reminiscent of Neruda and his vibrant, sensual imagery.
The intermixing of light and dark, passion and cold, shadow and sunlight makes this little sketch of love a poem that is a beautiful read of contrasts. - Your best so far. Please keep writing and sharing with us.