All Comments on 'Yours'

a poet (by his/her nature in command of language) can self-abnegate themselves as to capitalize you and not I. Whatever your submissive feelings, this is wrong--poetically--and your poetry won't improve until the I is capitalized and meant.

Beautiful poem will worth five stars. Do not worry over someone nit-picking over an i for an I. you know how you meant it, and it was correct. Keep writing they way you feel and let no one tell you that you should change it for the sake it would look better in a poem. Looking forward to more from you.

-Master Vyle

Discuss. I loved the poem, thanks.