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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
Where ...

is the mind,

when the pen

is drawn to write

such {prettywords}

into my head.

-sGp-

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Another treat added to the ZMP smorgasbord; just enough to whet the appetite and in doing, craving more. Well done.

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
**5**

HOORAY!! An other ZMP!! I love it it is SO TRUE!! And it rhymes!! A GOOD one, ZMA!! MORE PLEASE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
rhyme and rhythm...

at the zmp best...timing is perfect in this jewel...blue

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
i wonder if this...

little bit could look like this for a different effect. purely your choice.....

The annual cling

releasing when dry

leaves falling

dying to fly

its release -

the annual cling,

leaves fall

dying to fly.

*****

it's just another way to look at it. it would make a strong piece that much stronger.....don

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