All Comments on 'ZMP~ when turtles dance'

Art no need here for ! for either line

Here is your weak line, it is rather awkward

"is nudged to a dive, in the water it plopped!"

The repeat is a nice touch, fits well where you put it.

Art no need for ! on either line, would avoid it

here is your weak line: rather awkward

"is nudged to a dive, in the water it plopped!"

the repeat is nice and well placed

It's nice and cute, but I hate plopped. I hope your posse doesn't get all fuzzed up and fretful that I hate your plop. lol

what a great word!

Loved it Art.

Thanks.

~ J