All Comments on '01, 02: Good Morning'

This story is so goddamned pretty. I mean, sure, it's hot as hell, but it is also emotive and sweet, and the characterisation is great too. Bloody fantastic job, on the whole series.

Thank you for the story.

If I could write this well I'd quit my day job. Seriously. This is one of the best first person narratives I've ever read and it is certainly one of the best transgender stories of any kind that I've come across over the last 20 years.

Everything about this story says that it really happened. It seems hard to believe that something this detailed could just be someone's fantasy.

At any rate, I'm glad it's posted here. I hope it wins some sort of award.

I read the first section of this story and this second was just as good. Sex is such a passionate thing, yet barely do free stories online provide enough emotion. Yours do. It looks like you ended this with expectations for a third to add. Go for it!

A sweet story. One thing though. No way a cock just starts to grow out on a 'girl'. And if she was one before she should now be a hermaphrodite. Otherwise a intriguing and well crafted tale.

Very nice gentle tale of love. and eroticism. A tale of two becoming one with a very nice twist.