All Comments on '1,001 Nights: Day 01'

Thought this was to be about lesbians WTF

You've got a great flow and an interesting premise. I like your protagonist and I'm definitely interested in some of her ideas because there's obviously more to come. Good job! I'd just recommend a read through before submitting just to try and catch minor mistakes. Keep up the good work!

This is an excellent start to what I anticipate to be a fun series. Running it through a grammar checker would catch most of the errors: most are wrong words, probably generated by Otto Correct.