- Interracial Love
- #1 Draft Pick
- Comments
All Comments on '#1 Draft Pick'
by cunninlinquist
- 36 Comments
Anonymousover 16 years agoIt brings in money without really having to work. Only problem is she will have a black baby but thats what it takes.
SPEN STERLINGover 16 years agoI'm not typically drawn to interracial, but the image of the huge black stud and the wispy farm girl makes for hot reading. Well done!
Bazzzover 16 years agoNice to see you back writing interracial stories again. This one was very sexy. Good job
Anonymousover 16 years agoThat was a hot story. Well written and the sexual tension built throughout to an orgasmic conclusion. Absolutely loved the ending. Please do more!!
Heather
paigecroftover 16 years agoHi,
I loved the story and came really hard at the end but what was the deal with that bit about Kevin in the beginning? I felt really sorry for the guy and when you got to the footballer for a few paragraphs i wasn't getting into it because i was thinking about how crushed Kevin is going to be.
Unless you're planning to put Kevin in future stories i'd remove that part. That was all the kept me from giving you full marks.
Anonymousover 16 years agoGood story...and I work on a college campus. Stupidity doesn't come in one color and neither does intelligence. And some of the smartest kids I have met have been athletes. I will say that this doesn't always extend to the football players though, sadly. I have found very few that care about their education or life beyond the football field. It is nice to see a story about one who does.
mikej728about 16 years agoThat story was hot, it had my black hard dick throbbing, imagining u sucking on his thick dick had me cumming so hard. keep it up, cause u keep me up.
Anonymousover 15 years agoThis story had me sitting in a public restaraunt aroused like no other. I had to keep myself from rubbing on myself several times as I read this story on my T-Mobile Sidekick. The early portions of the story set up beautifully on how unprepared Katie was JD. Excellent story! Gonna keep an eye out for more of your work.
Numpseyover 15 years agoThis is a very tasteful story. Very nicely written. I am eager to see more of your work.
Anonymousover 15 years agoOnce the bigotry was left behind, it was a nicely written and sexy tale...
MidWestPrincessalmost 15 years agoIt took a little for me to get in to it, but I really like how you left it hanging and I'm dying to see what happens in the next segment.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI loved your story, but was wondering if there is going to be a follow up? Thanks keep up the great writing.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoWell done on an amazing story, it was very well written. Is there another part coming soon?
TemptressZeeover 13 years agoI usually have something to say, but this time around I can only think wtf?!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI am a writer, and I must say this was well written and had a plot that is common but yet very very possible. I cannot wait to read the next section to this tale. Keep up the great work.
ScarletPussover 11 years agoNICE! You caught my attention from the get-go and never let it go... Now I'm wet, ready, and snuggling up to Gram--my brother's best friend, and plan on fucking the living daylights out of him (whether he is willing or not) joking, he is usually done for whatever I want to give up LOL ...Yum. Thanks!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoNo human cock is over 12 inches long. That is as impossible as a 12 foot man. And, no human cock has the diameter of a coke can; that is 2.5 inches. And, even if that was possible, it would be impossible for her to get it in her mouth. Try it; it is impossible to get a coke can in your mouth. A few people, not many, might get something 2 inches in diameter in their.mouth.
If one should exist, a really huge cock would be 8 inches long and maybe 2 inches in diameter.
However, other than the stupidity about the cock size, the story was excellent.
dk519over 7 years agoThose sorts of college football stats don't exist..especially in the Big Ten. Also, the cock size was laughable. A foot long and as thick as a soda can? Finally, and this is my nit picky taste speaking. She only had sex with one person, her geeky friend. And she took the laughable cock size and begged for a facial? Weak.
I don't get why this story got so much praise. It wasn't different than most other over-exaggerated interracial stories with very little, very bland build up.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI always rub my pussy to this story. I've only been with white guys but since I started getting into these stories I can't look a tall black stud without having to change my panties!!
This is the best story on here! I want to be her so bad.
