by RainierWriterII
Good story. Nice work. Tyler was probably a little too perfect, but it works out in the end. Thanks for the read.
that was the most enjoyable story i have ever read on lit, please keep it up
Very nice story.wish my mommy was like that.You need to write part3 to "best intention"
The best part was how you told the story. You told it as an fairly innocent mother might have done. Through your exceptional choice of words, you brought us from her early 'proper' days, not to a slut, but to a mother so in love with her son.
Thank you for sharing with us.
loved the story...hope in the sequel she tries it up the ass. the loving son will go ever so slowly and gently until she is used to his size.
This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read on Literotica! Please do not let him deny his mom anything! And for that matter, do not deny your reader fans anything either, give us a sequel to this story and any more stories as well.
One of the very best. This story is by my definition "Literotica"
Keep up your work.
Utterly fabulous story, definitely one of the very best on Lit. There MUST be a follow up and it MUST include Tyler taking his hot Mom's ass, before breeding her.
One of the best. Believable and well written. Captured real feelings and emotions.
Thanks for a really outstanding story! One of the best Mom/Son stories I have ever encountered.
Another gem from one of the best writers at Lit.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
I really enjoyed the slow build and the way his mom was hesitant in allowing her feelings to become reality.
The way his mom was acting in the middle of the story, I wasn't all that sure he was going to get to make love to her, but then she finally gave in to her love for her son.
A very nice storyline and a good pace to the story, along with a good edit .
Thanks for the very good story
My goodness, but you knocked this one out of the park. From start to finish, an erotic love story between mother and son with nary a false note. Absolutely perfect!
So well written. One of the best I've read. At one point I was wondering where I could go to see the pictures, it seemed so real. Amazing story!
As good a Mom-Son story as I have read in a long time. Not a single flaw in the story line, not a word out of place. Outstanding!
its a fucking story and i loved it. it was worth it to make it five pages long hell that made it more fantastic. wonderfull job and keep it up. i expect a sequel to this one real soon
The value of a good build up. As good a foundation as I've ever seen, well written and believable. Well done!
What I don't know is just who the "WE" is in Mr Shit's comment as he certainly doesn't speak for me and the others who left comments! What I DO know is .... this was a fantastic story! Entirely believable and HOT! It put me right there with my own mom.
An exceptional story from an exceptional author. Thanks for writing and posting this top shelf story!
You are a great author with hot and believable ideas. This one was perfect, but way too short.... I really loved the anal part and photos she sent by e-mail.
Hope you will add another part in the near future.
Who was that idiot calling this story crap? If you want a wham-bam-thank-you-mam type of story go find other stories. And to author I have to say I always enjoy your stories and this was a masterpiece. Keep them coming.
well written.masterful build up.truly descriptive. Waiting for a sequel. Just proof read abit more before posting please
He also wrote a story with a same theme, although his story is more enjoyable because it doesn't contain cheating.
I'm glad I was patient enough to read the whole story. I like how you laid the story out, It was well thought out. I hope you continue with this story.
The loving couple got quite a surprise
when the old man caught his son in
the "cookie jar."
The wife lovingly replied,"Dont worry
sweetheart,I'll give you a divorce,as
soon as your son,is done with me!"
The End!
dam,,,too bad,,,i was right into it!! really enjoyed it,,,thanks!
Well..... Rather long. But stroke worthy. And very logical when you described the mother's dilemma. Enjoyed, overall.
Excellent writing and an extremely well thought out plot. I’ve been married for many years to a woman that is currently the mother’s age. Women may disagree, but in my opinion you did a great job capturing how women that age think.
AS ALWAYS MOTHER\SON STORIES SEEM TO BE THE BEST IN INCEST.THIS ONE ,WAS ONE OF THE BEST YET, BY ANYONE. IT GOT A LITTLE SLOW IN THE MIDDLE BUT , CAME OUT RUNNING . DAD WAS A REAL DOWNER IN THIS STORY. DUMP HIM IF YOU DO ANOTHER CHAPTER, IT WILL MAKE THE STORY GO A LITTLE FASTER. AND A LITTLE MORE OPEN FOR MOM AND TYLER. TO MAKE L O V E . LIKED IT A LOT............. A FAN...................LAROC OF AGES
Enjoyed. And ignore the comment about slowing down in the middle, I felt it was necessary to build to your climax (or theirs). More than just a sex story, it is a story with sex, although I might have given her a spanking to enthuse her during the early work-out sessions (but that's just me, I like the spanking aspect and, when she offered her bottom late in the story she'd have been sodomized, but, then again, just me).
Wonderful story. Loved the scenario, the working out, the middle aged woman who is determined to make a positive change in her body and self image. Not a word from the critical, lazy husband who apparently didn't even notice that he had back the woman he'd married, and maybe even an improved model. Let that be a lesson to husbands everywhere. Notice. Your. Wife. Young bucks lurk in the shadows ready to stroke their egos when they are neglected at home. I liked the confusion in the story too, when son thinks things are going one way, and mother backs off. But when she decides what she really wants, she goes for it.
Never have I felt so compelled to leave a comment! Best incest story ever! I loved the build up,the lil teasers that encouraged me to read on.
You already know I am a big fan of your stories. I loved this one as well. Only one small detail irked me. She described husband as decent enough guy then there was nothing decent about him. You went on to make him thoroughly an asshole. Fat, lazy cruel and probably cheating. I agree with assestment that son might be too perfect but it did work. I am glad I read this one is was enjoyable read and another great example of your outstanding storytelling ability.
This reminded me of how much I was in love with my mom. She was a short woman but had very large breasts. When she wore a bathing suit, her cleavage was so pronounced that I used to fantasize being with her. Thanks for a great story. XOXO Fred
the encouragement of the son for his mom's attempts to get herself back in shape obviously served a dual purpose for him, get his mom even hotter, and spending time with her getting her used to thinking of him as a lover instead of "just" as a son.
I've missed your stories, hope to see new submissions from you soon.
Never read a story so nice like this one... I could think how tall she was, how she'd look like, her son, the places, everything! The way things happened. Seriously, took my breath away! The moment that she wore her workout gear and went to show to him and she said she wanted to workout there and... with him, together, she asked him to think something to sweat i thought something to increase that. Like he saying something and putting her on her fours and rubbing her butt... but anyways! Just my thoughts. I want to read more and more your stories. It was so pervert and captivating at the same time.
Oh this was just sooooo freaking hot.. I wished for a (possible) sequel but I guess not huh?
Well, definitely 5/5 from me, I loved this! So fucking hot!
great build up, loved how she finally went for him-hot sex scenes, nicely written thanks
Loved this slow sensual tantalizing tale of getting some great "mom tail" along with love too!!!!!!
good job at writing this story had a great build up and straight mom son stuff which i love thought maybe at first you were gonna hook her up with old crush but loved how you put that away keep up the good work cant wait for more of this story
I think this was a great story and told so well. A son who truly loves his mother, a mother who truly loves her son. So much so that she struggles with her decision to accept her romantic and carnal feelings for him. And an indifferent, plus truly lazy husband, who is not even slightly sympathic to her as his wife, a woman, a lover, or even as a mother. How could a man not know his woman is lying in bed next to him masturbating? How could a man with a wife who is trying to love him and trying to improve herself live with himself after rejecting her advances. Fortunately she has a loving son to shower her MotherLove upon who doesn't mind accepting the truly earned title of 'Motherfucker'. It is a great job that you did not involve Billy Hanlon any farther than as a disappointment out of the past. An account of a titallating conversation between her and her highschool girlfriends over coffee in the morning would have been very entertaining, especially if she simply introduced him as Tyler and conveniently left off the 'Son' part. The three ladies could even have had a little fun with her and her 'toyboy', given the deep snowdrifts blocking the roads. And found out about her being 'Mom' in the heat of the moment. It was good that you had her reject the dance requests from the guys that wouldn't have looked at her in school, but she should have been allowed to tell them that she hadn't forgotten about it. You are good!
Love the build up and really enjoyed the story !!!!
Thank You, RainierWriterII
I absolutely LOVED your story. The plot and story development were excellent and it just drew me along as the story took shape. Exactly the way a story should be written. Your writing created images in my head just as if I were there.
I too never went back to my class reunions simply cause of the clicks and self centered former classmates. Maybe mine could have ended this way had I given it a chance.
The last 2 days was worth the read... I think this story needs some followup where the mother goes to visit the son at college...She can come up with a story about going out of town to work for a day or so.... Or going to another office for some training program....
It DEFINITELY needs some more chapters.....
I don't see a lot of mom point of view in stories - I imaginge it is very hard to write. Superb job on this. You're a top noch writer.
Great story. Excellent presentation. Consider having Tyler using his mother's name Kathy from time to time once they begin to get intimate. When Kathy returns to the room after the reunion consider having her wear the sexy panties and a slinky negligee when she presents herself to Tyler. I had hoped for more slow subtle foreplay between the two that built up over a couple of paragraphs.
In any event, it is a good story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Fantastic story, you did a great job with this. So good,please do a follow up.
This is a permanent favorite of mine. So we'll done!
I had to go back and read this a second time! I don't know how to say it. I really like this story. Its up there with a Scouries story about Angela's Valentine's Day. I like a seduction, the second thoughts, the feelings of guilt, the discovery, the reveal like at the Dance, and then the culmination of their Love for each other. I'm glad you described what they feel as real love instead of 'mom, I've wanted to fuck you for years' type of thing. He's loved her since probably before he knew what his PeePee was really for. Like most boys, at some point - probably while he was quite young - he likely wanted to take his father's place in more ways than one. She happily became for him someone completely different than who she was for Donald, as she should. She was beginning a new relationship, with a new man, with new emphasis and parameters. I thought, at one point, that as you described her High School Crush as being rather agressive that he would accost her at some point and try to force himself on the "nobody" from High School - and that there'd be a confrontation between him and her son. Tyler really did need a short section in the story to establish himself as the Alpha Male in her life. Donald hadn't been that in years, and mom was at loose ends with nothing but her career to fill her days. Yes, I really liked this. Thank You
I to thought it was a bit slow in parts plus the father, fuck, I nearly stop reading this story because of him. If you do a sequel kill him off at the beginning for fuck sake .. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it so fucking much. The nude photoshoot, the anal play and fucking her from behind oh dear I'm so wet right now... would have loved him to bend her over and duck her ass raw though ...leave her aching all over. Fuck I'm horny.
Absolutely loved this one. Great story line with perfect evolution. Loved it!
Very good build-up. Mom's dilemma, confusion, whatever and then coming to terms within herself was touching. Being told from her POV was beautiful though it would have been better if the son had been a bit more verbal with emotions.
What is missing from these stories, that is as good as this one, is a confirmation or acceptance of sorts by the characters for what has happened. The ending for this story is like many others. The barriers come down, the true feelings come out, the characters get their "groove" on and then THE END. "Closure" is probably not the best term to apply to an erotic story but I think that is what a lot of readers want. We like seeing the characters go after what there feelings are telling them but we want to see the characters the "next day". I don't need to see a saga or mini series but rather simply to see where their commitment takes them. I guess we are supposed to use our imagination for the rest of the story but my imagination is not that good. If it was, I would be writing and posting here.
This is all just my opinion of course. And sorry for all of the quotation marks. I am just trying to get my point across. A 5 plus. -bern1965(pending)
.......but then I love all your stories and your writing is superb.
THAT is the only reason I read incest. I love romance and oddly I find it here in incest stories. I can find it in Romance stories and Mature stories and a few Erotic Coupling stories. I don't read Erotic Coupling stories now, but I would read them if they were actually Romances. If readers would email me the stories that actually are Romances I would be grateful. My email address is jgstansell@yahoo.com
I enjoyed it very much. Needed another half page though. I think. Just the details of how she shit-cans that albatross of a husband, Don. Five stars.
A very good storyline that slowly builds up to an anticipated end, which did not disappoint. Please write some more.
A good story up Through pg. 3 but then it lost some of its sexiness. When mom left the reunion and came back to the hotel room, everything seemed rushed. Jmo though.
What a hot mom son story and with the hot unprotected sex with Tyler and Kathy being 43 she could easily get pregnant. That might be a little hard to explain to Don. Well written but the ending left me the reader wanting more. With the author not publishing any new stories since 2012 the chances are between slim and none to getting a sequel.
Awesome story! Just wish she would have dumped the loser spouse in the end. Maybe confirm his infidelity to keep him from getting alimony or a share of the house (she was the bread winner after all).
I seldom give a 5, but in this case you get one. It would be a shame if he knocked her up. Her limp dicked husband can go kick rocks.
This is one of the most tender, sensual and respectful mutually consensual incestuous love stories between mother and son that I have read in a while. Most pleasing was the fact that the mother recognized that her marriage had long since died and that her son loved her for herself as well as for being his mother. Psychologically, emotionally, and physically, she realized her son loved her unconditionally. Finally, mother and son possessed such a strong sense of self, self-worth and ego, that there is no need for self-loathing, self-recrimination, shame or guilt about their love for each other. It would have been nice if the author has completed this series with the culmination of husband leaving the story and mother and son further discovering themselves.