by bi_cathy
This near hopeless romantic loved “3 Crushes and a Wedding” and not simply for the outcome. Your ensemble of characters perfect and their journeys — yes, more focused on Zoe, but all the characters and their stories captivating. So enjoyed what you created. Easily enjoyed again and … . Rating option did not work for me, so just so you know: 5 Stars.
Great story, great ending. Loved the kisses at the reception, better than actual sex. (even better than the dessert pf the same name :) )
Great story! Loved the ending and how you wrapped the most up. Definitely some future possible stories there with Valentina’s threesome invite as well as Scarlett finally accepting her true self. Can’t wait to see what you put out next.
What a wonderful story! In this chapter, I loved the emotional conversations with Meg and finally that wonderful pinky hug. So good. And could there be more to come in the future for these wonderful characters?
@migbird - voting in landscape mode on mobile devices is broken for me. I have to vote in portrait mode now. Try voting that way.
Wonderful, nice ending to a great tale. Thank you.
A little spin of with scarlett maybe. Would love to find out how she does with the revelation.
Loved it….glad it was Megan. Would love to see the Threesome with Valentina and scarlett get her happy ending
Wow! I just finished this story, and Wow. It is instantly one of my favorites. I was immersed in it from the beginning. I read all seven chapters this morning, and did I say Wow! Your story was intensely emotional, sultry, erotic, and sensual. And sexy. And sexual. Many writers are more explicit in their descriptions of the sex scenes, but the desires and feelings you evoke in your characters are incredible. Far better. This will be a story I reread many times. Yes, I loved your story of Zoe and Megan. I have not read your other stories. They just moved to the top of my list. Thank you for sharing your writing.
Wow, this is brilliant, but please, please, please tell us more. We need an epilogue!
Mmm. How do I love this story?
The craftsmanship, yes. I’m reminded of a woodworking video where an armoire is built without any hardware, just meticulously formed joints secured with the occasional wooden peg. It’s beautiful and looks effortless.
The joy of seeing Zoe and Megan reconnect after all these years warms my heart. And loving Zoe’s mom knowing all those years ago.
The endless foreplay and flirting/seduction are delicious. Zoe and Scarlett before it becomes tragic. Zoe and Valentina are so hot (and yes in a couple of years I can definitely believe Zoe and Megan ask Dave for Valentina’s number). And last but not least the promise of Megan transforming into …. well, what we imagine Megan becoming.
And thus, once again, Cathy, we are in your metaphorical debt. So we acknowledge the months you spent creating this reality and say Thank You.
So so very very GOOD!
Read it in one sitting, could put it down!
Nothing more to say but Thank you for sharing your immense writing skills!
Is there room in your busy life foe a sequel, please?