All Comments on 'A Babe Amongst...Werewolves? Ch. 03'

I started reading this when it was first published on here! Please update soon x

when it took you almost a year to update without an explanation. Some of you lit authors................

Hopefully Elle will be able to buy some time when Dennis turn her loose for his sick game.

I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read more! Soon please??!!

I have been waiting so long for chapter 3, and it didn't disappoint. IT'S BRILLIANT! Now you have started writing this again, hopefully you will stick with it and the chapters should just flow more easily, so please hurry with chapter 4. :)

Thanks for the feedback everyone! :) Please comment/vote I'm really enjoying reading it!

And to those of you who have been reading since I first posted Chapter 1 thank you for being so patient! I got stuck on chapter 3 then I got annoyed and just ignored it. But I've started Chapter 4 and I'm really excited to get it finished and posted :-)

The story is familiar.

Regardless, I'm enjoying it so far. If you can post regularly, you could develop a good readership. I'll keep my eye out for chapter 4.

Hey everyone! Thanks for the feedback, I'm so sorry I haven't posted Ch 04 yet! Uni is crazy at the moment, but I only have 3 weeks til the semester is done woohoo! Iso I haven't had time to get it finished but I will! :-)

It's good that chapter 4 will be with us soon. Cannot wait. :)

I've just read chapters 1-3. Really enjoying your work just disappointed that chapters aren't longer and out faster. I look forward to the next chapter. Hope to see it soon. Keep it up. :-)

Looking forward to Ch.4.

I really hope Chapter 4 will be out soon

can't wait dis iz great

This story is really good, and I cannot wait to see a satisfying resolution to their troubles. I have noticed that it is much better to read stories that are complete rather than wait for months for each update, but this story is quite promising, so I do not intend to give up on it, however, at this rate it might be wise to check back only a long time from now - please tell me that won't be the case! I understand that life gets in the way and that you do not owe your readers anything, however, you do owe it to yourself to do your best for this wonderful story and to develop self-discipline if you are serious about being a writer, because you certainly have the talent. But talent without self-discipline is often squandered... For the future, a good advice that I've seen shared many times by writers (who have high hopes but end up having huge pauses between postings and thus alienate their readers) is that the best thing to do is to write the whole story before posting it. So maybe by some miracle you can get enough motivation to sit down and finish this story. I really hope so, because this story is worth it!

Morrrreeeee this is great

i like how this story is going, its building rather well. keep up the good work! can't wait for chapter 4 :)

I cant wait to read the next one.

A female lead that fights back instead of whining. And so far no bitchiness between females. Yeah, girl power.

This is a good story and could be a great one if only you could make the chapters longer. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

I hope to be reading the following chapters soon!!

Mane you can send a text when you summit a new chapter

please..please update ... we are dying here love to know what happens..

When's the next chapter ? I need to know what happens next!! PLEASE!!!

Amazing story !!!!!!

Can you please update. This is a great story.

YAAAYYYYYYY........... :(

another really good story forgotten and unfinished

*rolling my eyes*

Another good story left unfinished. Please finish.

Still on literotica??

Please come back and give us more! Love your story and writing style; really wish you would continue your story.

Hey everyone! Thank you for the lovely comments I am really sorry I got a bit stuck and then my tablet died so I lost the file, then you know life, busy, am currently studying overseas and I completely forgot about it.

Buttttt I am working on chapter 4 literally right now, I am a lit fan first and I really don't want this story to end up like so many on here with no ending. I totally know how disappointing it is to be reading a story only to realise the author hasn't updated it for a few years! So thank you for anyone who as stuck around, am hoping that I can submit the new chapter in a few days. :)

Did you ever finish chapter 4?

Omg i love this story.... cant wait to see what happens next i hope its exciting

Im so into this story that i bookedmarked it on my phone computer and tablet just waiting for you to update it. Breathing heavily............ lol

Good enough beginning. At this rate we shall all die of old age. It's disappointing.

neither one of us has any real talent for writing ..You by the way suck shit for not finishing this story or even adding to it in over a year ....you were just a huge waste of my time .I hope karma pays you back .

I like it! I like Elle's spirit & I hope you can finish the story-it has a good plot, hope, & moves at a good pace

I really liked the story. I wish I could read the rest of the story. It has a lot of potential but this is only just the beginning. However, since you haven't updated in nearly 2 years I won't hold my breath waiting for an update. I understand (I'm very much the same) but it's a real shame.

get to the good stuff!

Dum-tee-dee-dum-teedee-dum.m...and then there was a fire and they all died horrible deaths, as they were trapped in cages. I'm gonna go get drunk now.

A very entertaining read. I'd love to know what happenes

Hope you will continue this story sometime in the very near future.

Please continue this story, really eager to see what happens and what she does to that dipshit, hope she rips his nuts off, and chokes him with it. Seems only fair.

I swear this better not lead to another rape. What is it with you people and writing about people being raped all the time. I get that some people have rape fantasies but I am so sick of reading about rape in almost all the supposed romance stories I am coming across. I mean seriously. Where do you people live?

I was almost kidnapped at 16 and I can tell you it is NOT a nice experience, it as left me with PTSD even 17 years later.

I did start of thinking this was a good story and I am hoping it continues to be so. The packs coming in the nick of time. If not this is just another piece of tripe. Sorry to be so harsh but seriously. Rape and kidnapping is extremely rare. Think about that the next time you sit down to write something.

It's actually nice to read about "nice" fantasy romance, where good things happen and everything isn't doom and gloom. God knows the world is full of that already.

I can not wait to continue this:):)

Please write more. I couldn't stop reading, and I'm keen to see what happens next!

So much for being quicker at publishing chapter 4, it's only been 6ish years. Are you going to finish? Please say yes

so....so far this is brilliant but please, you are going to continue right? I an a canine behaviourist and have studied wolves and wolf folklore for years.

I ask quite simply for you to please continue, unless of course, you are unable to

as i said and i man it, its brilliant

please do

WELL, YOU ASKED US TO BE GENTLIE TO YOU AND THEN, YOU DON'T FINISH THE STORY!

Good Story so far, but needs more chapters.