by Punkrotica
OMG ! THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WANT DONE TO ME. I WAS SO TURNED ON AND SO VERY JEALOUS. I HAVE ALWAYS THOUGHT ABOUT BDSM BUT IT NEVER CAME INTO MY LIFE. AFTER READING YOUR STOREY, I WISH I HAD DONE SOMETHING ABOUT IT AND HAD A LOVER MAKE MY DREAMS COME TRUE. IT'S NEVER TO LATE, I HOPE. GREAT WRITING, SO REALISTIC AND HOT.
This was so hot!!! Would LOVE to be fucked the way she was and have all those things done to me exactly like that! <3 <3 <3
There was no part in this story that didn't turn me on! Does a guy like this really exist? And oh the part about the pussy spanking is when I finally came, not very many people really write about that, so it was definitely a pleasant surprise! Keep up the good work.
I have read all of your stories and honestly they have a tenderness to then despite there being a ton of (very well written) sex. It may sound lame but I read them just to read them and I find myself wishing they were longer, wantig more, not because I'm dissatisfied in anyway, but because you so skillfully enticed me. Thank you for such a wonderfully written story that punks like me can really relate to, visualize, and be immersed in. Please keep writing because I'll keep reading.
I'm not even trying to flatter you. A story has never made me cum so fucking hard in my life. Not just once either!! I came at least 6 times and the last one, I passed out for like 10 mins. Thank you very fucking much!
-A Satisfied Baby Girl
You wrote what I was considering a very hot story I would have added to my favorites and given 5 stars till you completely wrote that possibility off by the male character ripping into her ass with no lube. There's no excuse for writing sexual violence into a story. You used the words "thrusting into her ass" but let's not kid ourselves, it's a RIP when the ass is concerned, not only damaging the nerves and tearing the flesh but intolerable pain with burning, shrieks and screams. It's the equivalent of rape. I won't even bother to go into the psychological ramifications.
Funny not once did you state at the beginning or anywhere else that she was a masochist; no, cause she wasn't, it was clear. Disgusted by your mindless, ill choice and not bothering to warn readers at the beginning.