All Comments on 'A Bargain Ch. 05'

Superb. Waiting breathlessly for Ch. 6! Good job!

This story is superb. A story of sensuous love that lifts the heart as well as having a disturbing effect on my penis :)

A good story gone bad. You really fucked this one up.

Leo, You captured it so well! I can remember all my 'firsts' and you took a picture of them!

Thanks, Leo...SUPERB character development and description.

I wish I had your eloquence...and a Maxiraspberry to that coarse soul who left the nasty comment.

Keep up the great work! I await the coming chapters although with a certain sense of dread.

but you do know it takes roughly a month for the Pill to take effect, right?

thanks, merlins a good name, i'm going to use it

very sweet first time although after you read the other chapters it's sad really.

He got his answer, if I were him that would definitely have stopped the sexcapades.