A Beautiful Wish Ch. 05

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800IbGorrila
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"It's...great!"

"The young man is just being polite. It looks terrible." Enise said solemnly.

"Hey!" she pouted.

"Oh don't worry my dear. In the proper instance, such showy displays are to be expected. And besides, you're getting the damned thing for free. Beggars can't be choosers after all."

"Thanks Enise," said George.

"My pleasure, Sir George," he bowed. "Now, if you will kindly excuse me, the Antique Road Show is on in five minutes."

Enise didn't wait for their farewells. He quickly shuffled down his hallway and disappeared. Dawn took off the pendant and placed it carefully in its box. The two looked around some more at the various oddities in the shop before making for home.

As soon as the two entered the beat up old sedan, Dawn attacked George with loving kiss.

"What was that for babe?" he asked once he had a chance to catch his breath.

"For indulging my whims, and letting me have my fun. You are a very kind Master, and the best boyfriend a girl could hope for."

"Well I...might have had ulterior motives," he said as he ran his hands from her hips to her sides.

"Mmm, I bet you did." She leaned in close so that she could whisper to him, "I have wanted you so badly today. Will you please take me home and ravish me now. It does not feel right to go so long without your touch."

George didn't need to be told twice. He rushed home as fast as he could. Dawn made concentration almost impossible as she nibbled on his ear and ran her delicate hands over his quickly hardening shaft. He felt a rush of excitement as he turned down the street towards his house.

What he saw then, terrified him.

In front of his house, a police car's flashing red and blue lights lit up the surrounding neighborhood. He could see his mother's minivan parked out front.

"Oh no...Mom!" he rushed from his car towards the house.

"George, Wait!" cried Dawn as she ran after him.

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MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Great episode and segway into the next chapter!! George can have a Redhead and Blonde in his harem!!!

sviedsviedabout 7 years ago
Great as always

The cockney accent was beautifully done, at least better than when I try to write it down. Lindsey's so cute. And what's up with that old guy?

I never want this series to end... to bad there's only eight chapters. For now I shall live in the blissful ignorance that perhaps those chapters are really really long. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Clever

Chocolate Frosted Sugar Bombs, eh? Does this take place in a remote part of the Calvin and Hobbes universe?

DunaDunaalmost 12 years ago
Apology

I am sorry again: It is so miserable and akward when the omega in the highschool becomes the most succesful in the life among the highschool fellows and he does revenge against the past tormentors 3-15-25 years later after the graduation. George was perfect nice with Tammy and Brad, that was the past and he is the MOST SUCCESFUL with Dawn among class mates from the highschool.

However Rocko is the present and the cocky Rocko will deserve everything......

This will be an excellent contrast in the story.....Thank you author for 2 excellent characters as George and Dawn!!!!!!!!

DunaDunaalmost 12 years ago

@ Anon You are right about George, (and about the author) when he denied the Dawn temptation for the Asian girl.

However you did not tell anything George generousity for his highschool tormentors, because this scen was when I became fan and supporter of this story.

George there will not be such generouse with Rocko in the next chapter, because Rocko is a present dragonfly (bully) and Brad and Tammy are the past and I think that is so miseably when somebody who was the omega in the highschool and he became much more succesfull than his all school fellows he does revenge against his old school fellows after 3-15 years later. Rocko is other Rocko is a cocky present bully and George will decide on him well......

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