All Comments on 'A Beautiful Wish Ch. 08'

More, PLEASE?

I have found story, full of great erotica, but with an outstanding mix of sex, love, and pain. Unexpected in this genre, a promising, fascinating, a really, really good read that needs a sequel now! A weaving of young love, magic, pain, sex, and a genie no less! Absolutely recommended! I will try the authors other books in the hope of finding something as well written.

It's a drag that this story hasn't continued.

Hi,

I hope with all my heart that you'll be able to continue and finish this story, in spite of your current environment.....

It's good, more please?

Adriaan_DeBelge

Once again < something that J Brolly inspired and then quit , this is a good story and should continue to a real end.

This is a great story and I as well as obviously many other people wish for it to continue.it seems that most of the best ones I read end like this it is sad .at least bring things to an ending

Continue with the story!!

If you ever decide to write again, make the MC stop being a whiny bitch at some point.

Hi.

A beautiful story. Is there going to be more to it?

It is left unfinished.

This is a great series. Why did it stop? There are so many storylines yet to explore. Disappointing.

This story is so fucking good

A decade old.. dang..

The story is getting boring. Talk about an anti-hero...

This is a truly enjoyable series. Too bad it was never completed...

Hope the author is alive and well.

I have enjoyed reading what there is to this story. I wish the author would return and continue it but after more than a decade I do not see this happening. As such, I wish that another author would pickup where this one left off. Yes, the story will not be the same as if 800IbGorrila finished. But, at least we would have an ending to this story and if the tone of the new author's stories is like 800IbGorrila's than we could deeply appreciate his/her effort to bring a conclusion to this story. There are numerous stories on here that have been abandoned. Maybe some of the authors here could finish those that are like the stories they write. Maybe it could open a new index called Dead Stories. And maybe this is just WISHful thinking on my part for some type of continuation and conclusion on a story that I would enjoy reading more of.

I have enjoyed reading this story that you have written. I would love to see how you would continue to develop it. After more than a decade I realize this is not going to happen. So if you are ever on here I wish you the best and hope that things work out for you.

This has been a great story. I see that Joe Brolly's story was partially continued by another author, but stopped after that!!!! Please don't be like that, please finish the story!!!! There is another story that IS finished called "An Unforgettable Melody" by 'auguy86'. Please finish!!! I love the story!!!

I can’t wait for the next chapters to come out. The storyline is so delicious.

Neither 800lbs OR Joe Brolly's story was ever finished!

Coincidence?

I DON'T THINK SO!!!!

Both were excellent tales, with interesting characters and fine erotic descriptives...

BOTH STOPPED when the plot was thickening!

I even read that Joe had DIED!!! I can only hope that Gorilla's still monkeyin 'round!

Maybe the Genie King thought that things were getting a little too close to home?

I keep coming back hoping that there's more. Does anyone know what happened with the author? Maby someone else could continue this story.

Reading this was like Fingernails scratching a chalk board...I kept hoping that George would smarten up...but he never did...as an emotional cripple he was just too stupid to plan ahead and avoid all the problems encountered...in other words it was too unrealistic.

I really hope that the author comes back to finish this. I’ve really enjoyed this story and hate to see it go unfinished.

Not the first time I've read this, Does anyone know what has happened to the author?

Please continue this story! It's amazing and I'm dying to see more of where it can go.

It's very sad and annoying if people don't finish their stories, unless something life threatening came up.

This sucks

This is really a great story line with exceptional character development. Based on the date of the last post I doubt there will be any further chapters, but if any of this author's friends or relatives are following this I want you to know that we probably have lost a real story telling talent!

That was an exceptional story, I have fiund some really great stories on here this ranks in the top 3 if not the best. I hope you find it to write more if you don't decide to add mire to this one

More more more please please please

It's been 9 years since the posting of this chapter. I think it's time that we all form a posse to pursue this '800IbGorrila.' He's had his chance to finish this on his own. Now is the time that we MAKE him finish it. We'll hunt him down, poke him in a cage, and feed him nothing but bananas until he finishes the story to our satisfaction.

Considering I never want the story to end...I sure hope he likes bananas. 🍌😈

DJ

I think this story does a great deal of wish fulfillment, and gives hope to men with problems about their looks everywhere that beautiful women can look beyond that, and find inner beauty attractive.

I understand, from an author's perspective, that it is difficult for the protagonist to go beyond being monogamous and to form a harem (with Lindsey for a start) without being a jerk about it is hard. I wish the author all the best in resolving this.

Great story, I hope you eventually pick it up again.

title says it all

It needs to be finished. George should have Dawn ferret out any damning sexual secrets Dick has and wish them brought to light to disgrace the S.O.B. If she can't find any, then wish some up like get him arrested for kiddie porn or give him an uncontrolable urge for beastiality and exhibitionism so he'll record himself and share it. The guy's a complete slime-ball.

Please find it within yourself to finish it someday. Not for us, But for you.

Ok, maybe just a weeee bit for us too. :D

One of the best series on this site. Please cone back and finish it!

This story is so damned good. Please resurrect it, despite it being ages old by now...

For me, this is the best series ever red

For an ending to this erotic tail.

Please come back and finish this! It's too good to be abandoned.

Another great story that won't be completed. :-(

Please continue the story!

This was such a good series and then it ends open-ended... Uggh that's the worst. The same thing happened with 'One in Ten.'

It drives me nuts to get so far into an excellent story like this just to realize it has no ending and was written in 2008. I guess I need to to start checking the dates. I really wish you would continue the story is far to good to stop.

Good job keep up the good work cant wait for the next chapter if theres going to be another one

the ending leaves one up in the air.

Story good

Ending poor

I know it's been years and but you can't leave the story that open-ended! There were way too many cliff-hangers! It's a great story without an ending. I hope you will one day finish it although after this long I doubt it. I almost want someone else to finish it. I liked the characters too much to not get closure on them.

I have love all the genie series I have found but this and the original are the best. You can actually see the people. Please continue this to many cliff hangers left.

I wanna see more if this story!!!

If in some way any one is able to contact the author, im serious about willing to pay to see the story continue, or at the very least end.(using paypal ofcourse) i think this is literally my favorite story of all time and have read it over and over again many many times will traveling and working and there is just a magic and glow about the chararcters and the way he or she writes the Tale of this Genie and her "Master"

So, I really like the story, and am quite disappointed that it stopped at roughly the same as it's parent story, Genie Chronicles by Joe Brolly. Very few can actually pull of what you seem to have done. My one complaint is that you appear to have dropped it. Something that is more than a tad aggravating, but only compounded since Joe Brolly stopped as well. ONE OF YOU (preferably both) NEEDS TO FINISH!!! and then help the other if necessary.

My favorite story on Lit! Please write more

Please continue... If you can see this... I would love to read the rest of the story...

I really wish you'd finish this story, it's definitely quality and has lots of places left to go!!!!

So Sad ! the last instalment was posted back in 2008 and the writer hasn't posted since ! - At least under this name!!

I loved the story line and the writing and as somebody says earlier I haven't invested so much into a character for years!

I feel so pleased to have found this!! and so short changed that it wasn't finished :-(

I have published on Loving Wives my story "How Are You Not Being Neglected?".

My story contains ANR sex, so it will not be very popular. My story is a honor to 800ibgorilla masterwork. I tried to imagine what a character may be who is living human, but her nature is near to Dawn. I wanted to show Olga, who is a living Homa Sapiens Sapiens, but her nature is same high EQ (emotional quotiens) as Dawn.......

Please finish writing. Best story I ever read here. Would be a shame not to finish it.

This is a great tale and you are a wonderful story teller, I only hope that your muse allows you to continue on and finish this tale. Keep writing (if even about other things), you are a great storyteller. Thanks for the pleasure of reading your work.

I'd read this story a few times now and I have to say this is in the top 5 stories on this site, hell I think this story ties for first with PotN, another great story that ended before it could really begin and I just have to say that I wish there was more to this story.

I don't think I've felt so invested in a character for a looong time.

You've done a masterful job on this story. I'm sure you've invested many waking hours figuring out the nuts and bolts of this tale. I hope that someday soon the inspiration with grab you to finish it. Hopefully many more chapters actually as I didn't want it to end.

Thanks again for a wonderful read!

you need to right more of this story so many parts to go

Please write more I love your story.

Please please please say there will be more!!!

This is a great beginning. Its a shame that the writer is no longer writing. Someone, (there are many better writers than I on this site) should pick up the pieces and continue.

If you'd like to come back to this story but need an editor for help and encouragement, let me know. You have a loyal fan base who've waited 5 years for the completion of this story. A lot of your plot is already laid out clearly (Karen, Lyndsey, the ex-husband and mom, his going to college, dealing with Rocko, dealing with his younger sisters, getting over his dad's death, etc.) you could even boil it down to 2 more chapters if you wanted to cut out George with Karen and just inspire her for the next guy and only actually engage Lyndsey. Since finishing is obviously a problem, I'd recommend blocking out all of your current moving parts and not add anyone new. If you really want the full harem then you should plan for each character/issue and dedicate a chapter to dealing with each one, then give yourself one month per chapter (probably shorter and less fantastic, but at least fulfilling) with an editor to enforce your deadline and work with you a little each week.

Also, on a personal recommendation note, I think you need to end with something extreme with Dawn, like making her fully human. Assuming they do actually intend to spend their whole lives together which is what her mother's wish would lead one to believe.

Again, let me know if you'd like some outside help.

fantastic.I loved reading this story, thank you for submitting and for writing this tale I hope I get to read more from you

May it be 800Ibgorilla will publish in printed form this story and he is writing the book publish foem??????????

You really have done so well with this it deserves another 10 chapters. You have created enough back story that it I hate to see it end. This is a print quality story

I realize now that the last chapter was written way back in 2008.... meaning the chances of this story continuing is slim...

But if you ever get the motivation, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE carry on with the writing. It's one of the most beautiful things that I have ever read.

Is this the end of the story? You have no idea how much more of this that I want to read... Hell I made an account just to favorite this story. Please continue it, it's been months!

Please continue the story, its great. The main character has qualities which are very easy to relate to, even if most can only relate by wanting to be that way. The storyline is in depth although it is an erotic novel, and the characters otherwise were developed carefully and completely. I devoured all the chapter to date in a couple days. I would love to see you finish it, if you could find the time

Loved it when i read your work for the last day or two.

Can't wait for the rest!!

Dawn would be a super in ANR sex too. She could produce caramel test, cacao test milk..........If I were George I ate only milk from the breast of Dawn, ful of vitamins, pricipal elements, with enough energy and water.............To suck her milk with sex.......fantastic sex fantasy..........

In two days I've read all of your submissions. This is one of the best. Other than a few grammatical errors common with spell check it's very fetching. Hope you continue the series I have not very many good ones lately.

Looking forward to the next one (assuming its not canceled)

I beg you to continue the story of George and Dawn.

ANR sex may be a newer area which Dawn and George could discover..........

That is the only way to describe thus story I really like how the main character is. I can honestly say I can't wit till the next chapter

I love this story and to see more soon.

Don't worry everybody. About a year ago, gorilla wrote that he was working on the story and plans on finishing it before he posts everything. I hope he finishes soon but he said it may take a while. Also, I'm not sure but I believe Joe Brolly may have passed on. May he rest in peace.

You have such a good story going. It's one of the highest rated series I've seen with some very interesting tangents developing.

have you abandoned your story, characters and devoted readers? cuz this is an amazing story, and i want to know what else happens! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! finish

I really like George, Dawn, and Lindsey. Would really like to see their story continue. Would really like to see George stand up to both Richard and Rocko. And what was with the mysterious antique dealer? That was seemed sinister. I would like to see a happy outcome with George, Dawn, and Lindsey all together.

Yeah long time fan first time commenter I love the series it's definitely one of my favorites but you've kinda left us hanging no updates at all I've kinda given up hope of joe Brolly finishing his series as well

still reading it, four years after you published. Still hoping for you to finish. I actually enjoyed the parts featuring the conflicts with people that used to ignore him and pick on him more than the sex parts, though they are amazing as well.

I love the passion, the fire between George and Dawn. I am amazed at how well you captured every characters emotions, personality, and motivations based upon their background and how that affects their standing in the social hierarchy. I would give anything for a woman like Dawn. I believe that this story is a little more personal than any of your loyal readers would believe. It is the insight into the transition from pain to bliss, that I feel confidant that your life is better now that it was say 10 years ago. I would gladly pay several times the sticker price if you ever releas a book. I urge you to continue.

Please this is one of the best stories i have read and I need you to finish it Please

Can the author of this story please finish it and publish it, so i can purchase it? I would never get tired of this story and I would never want to forget a story like this, I love it so much!!!

Where did he go? One of the best writers...gone. Maybe Brolly and Gorilla are the same person

......I just started reading the "Genie Chronicles" Story which was made a few years before this one by Joe Brolly. I'm still on the first few chapters but if "A beautiful wish" is over you could try reading that. I still say 5 stars even if its incomplete.

The author was recently on here. His last activity was about a month ago, but all he did was delete his biography. Please update us if u plan on finishing this amazing story, or if u are going to abandon it. Just don't keep us waiting too long.

This genie could organize a Karen, Lindsey, Dawn George night, because this is her work in a harem but she would prefer a 1-1 only Dawn George life. Dawn asks about Lindsey at George with such resignated mood, which means she could imagine a monogamous connection. I am sincer I could imagine a monogamous connection with such a genie for me. Moreover Dawn would be an fantastic mother. I prefer 3 children with her 2 girls and 1 boy. She could help the children's future with compiling lovers and marriages......and her body would not change after 3 childbirthes. The common children would be healthy, smart, nice with Dawn......I would be George I would try the adultbreastfeeding with her (I prefer milk to beer)............I woke up because my arms reached the night dish...........

I believe we all hoping for a continuation of this story. Fantastic writing style, and involving themes.

Needs a Lindsay-Karen-Dawn-George foursome for a finish.

The Author changed his biography's sentences. Does he follow the story or not?

I really like your story and I really hope that you post more of it but I wanted to add that I think you should add a little more story and a little less sex. I say this because it seems like every other sentence is sex....maybe have a little more balance?

If your still planning on finishing it then I anxiously plan on waiting for my turn to finish it.

I absolutely love this story. Well written and exploring the depth of George's feelings for everyone around him. I wish that you would definitely finish this story. I want to know what is it that bothers George so much that he shuts down everytime he gets ready to express his true feelings about the people that he loves and love him. Kudos to you on a great story. Keep up the good work.

I read this while you were originally posting it and still check back in hopes of a new chapter. I saw that you had updated your biography more recently and when I realized there was hope for you to continue this story I went back and re-read it. As before I LOVED it. And now I want more again !!!! I hope your life settles out and when it does please please please post more. I love your story and it's one of my favorites on here. You have some fans here and I know i'm waiting anxiously, if not so patiently for a continuation of this story :) *fingers crossed *

That you no longer continue what may be easily one of the better, well thought out stories on this site. If you still check in here, it'd be nice to see something from you!

Thanks either way for an amazing story!

A story that was well written and was very good. Unfortunately it was never finished, which is depressing. Such a good story, but never finished. I can only hope that it will be finished sometime in the future.

God... Beautiful story, friend. Absolutely absorbing, even were it totally PG-rated. Actually makes me a bit sad, though; I'm a lonely, friendless loser. Where's my genie?