All Comments on 'A Better Life for Lauren Ch. 02'

Wow, this series is really really awesome!!!!!!!!!

please continue with nc content and i'm sure it'll be highly appreciated)))))))

i sure hope things might work out so she gets back to the boat.

this story is amazing, too bad earl couldnt see beyond the 'rape' scenario. it seemed like she could of led a good life between earl and bubba. please continue with this story as i would like to see lauren have her happy ending.

I agree with the last posted comment, this was a great story, too bad earl and bubba could not see beyond the rape scene forcing lauren to leave again. I truly believed should would of led a better life with earl and bubba. Loved the interacial story line of this tale and hope to see more.

This author has created the most amoral girl in history,and made her so genuine that just imagining there might be a real-life Lauren out there is enough to make me hard! Great job.

Loved the first 2 chapters--I hope there's another part too!

After loving the first part of Lauren's story, I really hated this second part.

And the end was heartbreaking.

It didn't deserve the title.

(WHAT) BETTER LIFE FOR LAUREN????

I hope you plan on adding another chapter where Earl comes after Lauren.

Earl NEEDS to come after Lauren. He's heart, but if he understood her past he'd forgive her. They need to be together. This could be one of the first NOO-stereotypical interracial relations on the site. So much potential, please write more!!

Hope there will be more

Great sorry, I really hope there is more to come. Earl needs to go after her please keep writing this story

When is the next part coming. I hate cliffhangers....lol

Kind of sad that her trying to survive messed up her relationship with Earl. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

good story but stop making everyone talking like rednecks and use proper engish.

it's really distracting to the story